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 # Desktop environment integration
 
 Different operating systems provide different features on integrating desktop
-applications into their desktop environments, for example, on Windows
+applications into their desktop environments. For example, on Windows
 applications can put shortcuts in the JumpList of task bar, and on Mac
 applications can put a custom menu in the dock menu.
 
-This guide introduces how to integrate your application into those desktop
+This guide explains how to integrate your application into those desktop
 environments with Electron APIs.
 
 ## Recent documents (Windows & OS X)
 
-Windows and OS X have provided easy access to recent documents opened by the
-application via JumpList and dock menu.
+Windows and OS X provide easy access to a list of recent documents opened by
+the application via JumpList and dock menu.
 
 __JumpList:__
 
@@ -39,12 +39,12 @@ app.clearRecentDocuments();
 ### Windows notes
 
 In order to be able to use this feature on Windows, your application has to be
-registered as handler of the file type of the document, otherwise the file won't
-appear in JumpList even after you have added it. You can find everything on
-registering your application in [Application Registration][app-registration].
+registered as a handler of the file type of the document, otherwise the file
+won't appear in JumpList even after you have added it. You can find everything
+on registering your application in [Application Registration][app-registration].
 
 When a user clicks a file from JumpList, a new instance of your application will
-be started with the path of file appended in command line.
+be started with the path of the file added as a command line argument.
 
 ### OS X notes
 
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ of `app` module would be emitted for it.
 
 ## Custom dock menu (OS X)
 
-OS X enables developers to specify a custom menu for dock, which usually
+OS X enables developers to specify a custom menu for the dock, which usually
 contains some shortcuts for commonly used features of your application:
 
 __Dock menu of Terminal.app:__
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ __Tasks of Internet Explorer:__
 ![IE](http://i.msdn.microsoft.com/dynimg/IC420539.png)
 
 Unlike the dock menu in OS X which is a real menu, user tasks in Windows work
-like application shortcuts that when user clicks a task a program would be
+like application shortcuts that when user clicks a task, a program would be
 executed with specified arguments.
 
 To set user tasks for your application, you can use
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ __Launcher shortcuts of Audacious:__
 ## Progress bar in taskbar (Windows & Unity)
 
 On Windows, a taskbar button can be used to display a progress bar. This enables
-a window to provide progress information to the user without that user having to
+a window to provide progress information to the user without the user having to
 switch to the window itself.
 
 The Unity DE also has a similar feature that allows you to specify the progress
@@ -171,11 +171,11 @@ window.setProgressBar(0.5);
 ## Represented file of window (OS X)
 
 On OS X a window can set its represented file, so the file's icon can show in
-title bar, and when users Command-Click or Control-Click on the tile a path
+the title bar, and when users Command-Click or Control-Click on the tile a path
 popup will show.
 
-You can also set edited state of a window so the file icon can indicate whether
-the document in this window has been modified.
+You can also set the edited state of a window so that the file icon can indicate
+whether the document in this window has been modified.
 
 __Represented file popup menu:__